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The Monkees ran down the first alley they came across and ducked into it.The police ran right past the alley.The Monkees each let out a sigh of relief."That was close!"Mike gasped."Yeah,"Davy replied.The Monkees turned to walk down the alley,just to be sure they'd escaped the cops,when they saw Babyface gripping a boy's shirt collar."Babyface!Stop!"Mike,Davy,Micky and Peter yelled in unison.Babyface dropped the boy,who stood up clumsily and ran out of the alley."WHAT?"Babyface said,turning towards The Monkees."Can't you losers see I was in the middle of something there?"He crossed his arms."You weren't going to kill that boy,were you?"Peter asked nervously.Babyface smirked."If he paid a fair amount to keep his miserable life,then maybe not."He turned to leave,but Micky grabbed his shoulder.Babyface turned around and slugged Micky right in the stomach."Oof!"Micky groaned,falling to the ground."Don't you EVER touch me again,Dolenz!"Babyface shouted.Davy,Mike and Peter helped Micky stand up."There he is,,"Someone yelled.Everyone turned and saw the police standing there."Get him!" "Oh,no!"Micky sighed,thinking they wer exoming for him.Georgie chirped in Micky's pocket.But they weren't coming for Micky;they were running towards Babyface.The police tackled Babyace,and after several minutes of confused fighting,the police handcuffed Babyface."It's the Big House again,Morales!"One of the cops said.They dragged Babyface out of the alley."Wait,so that's it?It's....over?"Mike said.Georgie chirped,and Davy jumped up."No more Babyface!"He exclaimed."He escaped once,so he probably will again one day,though,but hopefully not for a while."Mike said.The Monkees exchanged victorious smiles,then walked out of the alleyway,and began the walk home."It's the Monkees!!!"The Monkees turned and saw several young girls running towards them."Here we go again!!"The Monkees sighed,then ran down the block.
Here's the last chapter!Sorry it took so long and that the story was so short,but I hope you like it anyway!;)
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AnimeMonkee Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And that's the end of Baby Face's crimes. Or is it? :icondramaticplz:

Awesome job on this story :iconcheeringplz:
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Bialy-Bloom Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
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Thanks!Glad you liked it!:)
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paulwellerfan79 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Awesome ending!!! I guess that does it for Babyface! Thanks so much for sharing this! :heart:
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Bialy-Bloom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!And you're welcome!:hug:
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MonkeesLover Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice ending. :)
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Bialy-Bloom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!:)
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BritishSixtiesBeat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This was very good! :)
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Bialy-Bloom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!Glad you liked it!:)
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BritishSixtiesBeat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! It was very good! :clap:
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Bialy-Bloom Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
:aww:
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